CHAPTER 1, Part XXV Indeed, then, the situation was substantially different than I had previously surmised. Whether it was much worse, I had yet to decide. My operative theory had been that the Hakar… (View Post)

Always a pleasure to offer whatever off-the-cuff impressions I can - I"m glad you found them interesting/helpful. Happy to field some questions via PM, but can't promise same-day turn-arounds ha… (View Post)

CHATER 1, Part XXIV Wasting no time, I reached greedily for a second scroll. This spell was even more conceptually tangled than the one before, but eventually I fought through the thicket to understa… (View Post)

LET'S GO! This is so great! I am so excited to see you starting this project, and what a promising start it is! I'm sure you had guessed I would be reading, but I want you to know that I will be read… (View Post)

CHPATER 1, Part XXIII It was time. I cast about the room for the wad of papers I had stripped from the man in the black and emerald coat. The semi-crumpled mass slouched halfway under my bed. I picke… (View Post)