Bit of a long chapter. It started off quite straightforward but felt I needed to develop the characters/relationship a bit more. And of course that ends up leading to more and more. Anyway here it is… (View Post)

When does Neera ever stop throwing spells and hurting people? Another reason the character's a bit crap, big back story reason for her appearence that affects nothing about her actions. Any reason sh… (View Post)

I agree, but it could have been incorporated by simply removing the dialog, "oh she must have gone back to Athkatla". Never have understood why she went back there anyway, wouldn't she have… (View Post)

You have to "roleplay" to feel sympathy with a person who has suffered abuse from their parent which you witness? Or somebody who has a sibling murdered? The scene when you visit Anomen's h… (View Post)

@subtledoctor "Anomen is a 1-dimensional tool with 1st-world problems" Abusive parent and a murdered sibling is a "Ist-world" problem? It's good to know that anywhere outside the … (View Post)