-We have a new title now. I decide to change because I want to include.....stuff. rock, paper shotgun XD Also, I thought the previous title was to long. (View Post)

I think the first draft you wrote. Simply, because it seems less trivial. (I didn't ready every sentence you wrote. I want a medal.) (View Post)

12- CKIMMBER DUU has come back. She has spent time with her people and has show more power upon her return. “We discussed your troubles, me and my brothers and sisters and your life may everyone. I w… (View Post)

11- HALP and his companions plunged their way through Cloakwood. Before long they were in the mines of the area. They flooded the “hell-hole” to end the miners’ suffering. Many archers were dispatche… (View Post)

10- HALP was very happy to find more things in JYM’s place of hiding. He wonders if one day she will take from him in return. Maybe she will ask for a favor or to travel with the group for adventure.… (View Post)