rufus_hobart
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Re: Nimran's Story
Wow, very nice work here. Your descriptions are terrific and I really like how with each paragraph you let us in on further information while still linking to what came before. Your skill at story bu… (View Post)6 -
Re: A bunch of chapters.
Ugh , typos and edits ahoy, thank you both for picking them up, I tried to comb through the text but evidently got lazy. Thank you both @Nonnahswriter and @BelgarathMTH , indeed I got sloppy with g… (View Post)6 -
Re: Artificial Sunlight casts False Dawn
Hey, thanks for the introduction to your good self, nice to know you a little more, keep up your good posting and modding. Now if you don't mind, I'm pulling the thick curtains over and going back to… (View Post)1 -
Re: 2
Well done!!! The gnoll fortress on SCS is no small feat, especially with a party of 4. Lovely storytelling too, extremely tense reading when we're given Tilly's viewpoint on their situation, you real… (View Post)5 -
Re: A bunch of chapters.
Chapter 2.4 Incensed, scared, and angrier than she'd ever felt in her life, Laisha rushed through the trees, not caring where she stumbled, just wanting to flee from the sight of her dead father and … (View Post)Post edited by rufus_hobart on6
