. The point is (View Post)

Always elves :) (View Post)

I agree on the 'showing' rather than 'telling'. I've only read Chapter 1 but I feel you are giving away too much information, maybe you should reel back just a little and leave something for the imag… (View Post)

? Said the pointy (View Post)

True. What is it with Grimsby? The next poster is going to watch Eurovision this year. (View Post)