Like all skills, writing is one you have to keep doing over and over... it really is the best way to improve. Unfortunately, it's unlikely anyone would turn out an award-winning multi-book epic on th… (View Post)

Oh, and I second the suggestion to read more fantasy books. The best way to learn how to do it, is to see how others do it... you then get a good idea of what you like and what you don't like. (View Post)

It's a common and subtle problem in many media but I would emphasise 'showing' us what happens and not 'telling' us what happens. As an example, your introduction of Arin is you telling us what he lo… (View Post)

Great update... RE: my earlier comment... Notepad++ has a nice compare plugin allowing you to compare two files side by side and makes installing updates and new UI.menu changes more easily. At least… (View Post)