People used to throw rocks at him. Poor Noober. (View Post)

Like all skills, writing is one you have to keep doing over and over... it really is the best way to improve. Unfortunately, it's unlikely anyone would turn out an award-winning multi-book epic on th… (View Post)

Oh, and I second the suggestion to read more fantasy books. The best way to learn how to do it, is to see how others do it... you then get a good idea of what you like and what you don't like. (View Post)

It's a common and subtle problem in many media but I would emphasise 'showing' us what happens and not 'telling' us what happens. As an example, your introduction of Arin is you telling us what he lo… (View Post)

There's a compare plugin for np++ that does the same, highlighting the differences line by line for you. In theory, if each person that made changes had some kind of toggle on/off for their changes t… (View Post)