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[typo] - journal entry outside Candlekeep

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edited November 2013 in Fixed
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  • JalilyJalily Member Posts: 4,681
    LOL, Typo Tilly! <3

    *fixes* Thanks.
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  • JalilyJalily Member Posts: 4,681
    edited March 2013
    Oh? Then you might enjoy the title of one of my bug reports, concerning the ability to charm the antidote from Marek upon your very first meeting: "Marek's magically manifesting medicine mangles muddled multistep mission."
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  • GallowglassGallowglass Member Posts: 3,356
    Nice one indeed, @Jalily.

    @tilly, there'd also be justification for a semi-colon rather than a period; perhaps even more so if we're to be pedantic. I agree, though, that the comma is poor punctuation and the period an improvement.

    Since you love alliteration, you may wish to bear in mind that proper punctuation plus punctilious proof-reading probably prevent piss-poor player perception.
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    edited March 2013
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  • DrusycDrusyc Member Posts: 44
    @tilly 《that's my style and preference; I tend to impose [...]》

    They are independent clauses so you can opt to use a semicolon to avoid excessive commas and 'and's. Nobody's English is perfect.

    Good catch on the journal entry though, wow.
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  • GallowglassGallowglass Member Posts: 3,356
    tilly said:

    You can write entire books without using a period. Fun. ^_^

    Sure you can, but reading them would be more of a challenge! :-)
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