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"Both of Us", Part 1/10

SasayakiSasayaki Member Posts: 137
"... let's return to this subject later, when we have more time to enjoy it," said Neera.

And then we killed my half brother.

It's a lot more complicated than that, of course. And by complicated I mean killing. Blood and murder always seem to follow in my wake, and doesn't seem to care who's on what end of the blade. Fate seems to want to twist a knife in me, and I'm struggling to see the good in all of this.

There's one little spot, though. Neera.

I think it's still early days, and it's hard for me to put into words how exactly I feel, but... there's something between us, no doubt.

We kissed. That happened. I was surprised I didn't turn into a llama when it happened, and although the scowl Viconia gave me could have pieced the Prime and cut a hole straight through to the Pits, it felt good.

Rasaad gave me a subtle nod, to tell me that I'd done well, and his smile was a mile wide.

Dorn didn't care, of course. He just looked bored. I worry about that orc.

Now we're here, in this temple to Bhaal hidden under the ground, a thousand tonnes of rock over our heads and the slain body of Sarevok at my feet. We were filthy, covered in blood, dirt and grime; but somehow Neera looked more beautiful than ever.

"So," she said, the end of her staff bloodied. "It's done, isn't it?"

"I think so," I said, giving Sarevok a careful prod with my boot. As we watched, his body -- armour and all -- slowly disappeared into thin air and all there was a faint lingering feeling deep in my gut.

A Bhaalspawn had died. I'd gained a fraction of Sarevok's considerable power. The others had gotten the rest. I didn't feel good, though. I felt hollow.

"Good riddance to bad rubbish," said Jaheera, barely able to stand, her skin a pale, gauntly white. She swatted away Khalid's feeble attempts to tend her wounds. "Perhaps now we can rest."

"Perhaps," I said, but some part of me knew that we would be given no rest.

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  • SasayakiSasayaki Member Posts: 137
    Will post other parts as they're written. :)
  • LordRumfishLordRumfish Member Posts: 937
    @Sasayaki From one writer to another, keep going! There might not be a ton of interest for the fan creations section but somebody is reading out here. Even if we weren't, write for yourself. ^_^
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