[Thriller Action] Dreams in throat
old_jolly2
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Hello ,
I just happened to write a short detective action RP , if you are interested. There will be only one character playable , so it was better for chat environment. We can try here , but. The background goes :
A time , you get invited to a high-school comeback party of one of your co-workers , who you met to be graduated from the same , though you did not remember him. He lives in a large residence inside a small wood , not very afar from downtown. As the night continued , you met the girl you liked again after years , after a usual cold chat , she said she will leave for smoking.
As the tense alarm emotion ringing through you , an excitement to fill your life with something , that hanging out with her may be's , the fake atmosphere of smiles cut cold by police sirens sounding closing , and that just stops at the highest volume , and won't pass away. Crowd diverts their attention with you as well , only left for you to find that the woman was killed.
Keeping distraction at bay , policeman did their usual routines as you found some ways to chat with whomever you could find knowlegable about the incident. Asking many times the same questions you do in the great shock you had , filtering those that are made you drive away , you presume it is a knife wound , as a single thrust to the throat.
Relief would not suit you to start over your dreams for another friendship , and you feel you should get involved in this , as the intensity at the back of your brain won't let go , to do a good for all the dreams you had spent about her , with whatever you can do left.
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So , anyone interested to get involved solving this mystery ? Who'll be the "the old time lover" ?
I just happened to write a short detective action RP , if you are interested. There will be only one character playable , so it was better for chat environment. We can try here , but. The background goes :
A time , you get invited to a high-school comeback party of one of your co-workers , who you met to be graduated from the same , though you did not remember him. He lives in a large residence inside a small wood , not very afar from downtown. As the night continued , you met the girl you liked again after years , after a usual cold chat , she said she will leave for smoking.
As the tense alarm emotion ringing through you , an excitement to fill your life with something , that hanging out with her may be's , the fake atmosphere of smiles cut cold by police sirens sounding closing , and that just stops at the highest volume , and won't pass away. Crowd diverts their attention with you as well , only left for you to find that the woman was killed.
Keeping distraction at bay , policeman did their usual routines as you found some ways to chat with whomever you could find knowlegable about the incident. Asking many times the same questions you do in the great shock you had , filtering those that are made you drive away , you presume it is a knife wound , as a single thrust to the throat.
Relief would not suit you to start over your dreams for another friendship , and you feel you should get involved in this , as the intensity at the back of your brain won't let go , to do a good for all the dreams you had spent about her , with whatever you can do left.
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So , anyone interested to get involved solving this mystery ? Who'll be the "the old time lover" ?
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Dreams in throat , OST : Pendulum - Granite ( Album )
and there is permafail in here , I will finish the story if you fails... No start-overs...
Sounds fine anyway, mostly in the part that there's a girl tha the mystery is interesting and, well, and we need some Jansening here you know.