@Quartz haha, I should clarify. I'm not asking you to voice it, I plan on doing that myself I'm just asking for feedback from someone who's done a few already, and the community, on the level of bad jokes. Thanks anyway though, Good advice. If you want to do it anyway, by all means, go for it. I'm not sure how my 15-year old voice+braces is going to go over. I may or may not post, depending on how well it goes. As for the clump, that's him dramatically collapsing from exhaustion(jester) and the bang is him hitting his head agains a wall or some other indication of boredom that goes bang(shooting a gun atthe wall, ect:). I'm also worried about my gollum impression, if I can't do that, I'll just try and voice the line as dramatically as possible. Sorry for the confusion. And thanks for reminding me what I forgot I knew there would be a lot.
Tired: is life itself not long enough?! Must we continue this mindless trek without rest?! Whhhyyyyyy!!!??? Whhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyy????????!??? *clump*
City:ah, how I love the bustle of the city! I wonder what that lady just duped out the window?
Leader: ohhhh.... so this is what the party looks like from the top.
Party death: Ooopsy-daisy
Crit hit: ohhh, feel the burn!
Crit. Miss: all part of my elaborate plan.
Daytime: were.... Are.... My sunglasses?
Trap set: Careful now, we wouldn't want to get all tangled up, would we?
Inventory full: (oops) HEY MAN, WATCH IT! LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO! [or] *shattering noise* (oops) looks like somebody dropped something! [which is better?]
Spell disrupted: ouch! Ohhhh, bother!
Dungeon: y-ya- you Have someone looking for traps, right?
@meagloth Lmao, why'd you post it here then?? Very confusing. :[ Glad you appreciated the advice nonetheless. If you want, I'll have a go at it anyway. Nobody has shot me a request yet, so I'd enjoy doing it. I've got lots and lots of free time this June.
Crit. Miss: all part of my elaborate plan. is the best Critical Miss line I've ever seen. Props.
For Inventory Full ... the first one is better IMO.
@meagloth Lmao, why'd you post it here then?? Very confusing. :[ Glad you appreciated the advice nonetheless.
I just didn't know where else to put it. I just wanted a little feedback, and I didn't think just the little script merited a new thread. Once again Sorry for the confusion. Thanks anyway, man. I means to record tomorrow, but that's sort of thing rarely pans out:/ so we'll see. I'll just make a youtube(if I get that far) and worry about implementing it later :P
@meagloth No worries man, sorry if I came off as angry at all.
Btw ... I think your little script could merit its own thread just fine. To be honest, Fan Creations is a rather lifeless subforum so another thread could only help. Or so one would hope.
This is for a non-joinable NPC from a mod I'm making, he should be an Elven bounty hunter, respectful but evil, he's a little arrogant and goes behind money & loot all the time. Take MALE5 as an example for vocalizing, but make it sound a little bit more evil & daring. #1 Selection 1: "Always keep an eye on your back" #2 Selection 2: "Hehe, down with your sword" #3 Rare selection 1: "Ooh, you dare!" #4 Battle cry 1: "Die, so I claim my reward!" I'll then (re) write some lines, particularly the dialog ones
Nice soundset. Here would be my request for a good male voice...
Spoiler:
SAY MORALE ~Such is the way of the world.~ SAY HAPPY ~You're an amazing leader.~ SAY UNHAPPY_ANNOYED ~I wouldn't have done that.~ SAY UNHAPPY_SERIOUS ~One more mistake and I'm gone.~ SAY UNHAPPY_BREAKING ~I warned you. I'm gone.~ SAY LEADER ~I'll do my best.~ SAY TIRED ~I'm so tired.~ SAY BORED ~*Yawn*.~ SAY BATTLE_CRY1 ~You will resist no longer!~ SAY BATTLE_CRY2 ~Prepare to Die!.~ SAY BATTLE_CRY3 ~Die already!~ SAY BATTLE_CRY4 ~Vengeance will be mine!~ SAY DAMAGE ~Uhh!~ SAY DYING ~My quest ends here...~ SAY HURT ~I'm hurt, damnit!~ SAY AREA_FOREST ~Out here, no one can hear you scream.~ SAY AREA_CITY ~This place is a world of possibilities.~ SAY AREA_DUNGEON ~All kinds of dangers lurk in the shadows.~ SAY AREA_DAY ~After every darkness comes the dawn.~ SAY AREA_NIGHT ~Those who hate the night fear their own, inner, darkness.~ SAY SELECT_COMMON1 ~Yes?~ SAY SELECT_COMMON2 ~How should I proceed?~ SAY SELECT_COMMON3 ~Pardon me?~ SAY SELECT_COMMON4 ~What?~ SAY SELECT_COMMON5 ~Yes?~ SAY SELECT_COMMON6 ~I'm listening.~ SAY SELECT_ACTION1 ~Onward.~ SAY SELECT_ACTION2 ~I move forward with caution.~ SAY SELECT_ACTION3 ~I got it.~ SAY SELECT_ACTION4 ~As long as we're still standing~ SAY SELECT_ACTION5 ~We must continue or lose everything.~ SAY SELECT_ACTION6 ~Anything in pursuit of our quest.~ SAY SELECT_ACTION7 ~Done.~ SAY SELECT_RARE1 ~I'll bide my time until this quest is over.~ SAY SELECT_RARE2 ~Be careful.~ SAY CRITICAL_HIT ~Meet your doom!~ SAY CRITICAL_MISS ~Nine hells!~ SAY TARGET_IMMUNE ~My weapon isn't doing anything!~ SAY INVENTORY_FULL ~Damnit!~ SAY SPELL_DISRUPTED ~That's a waste of my power.~ SAY HIDDEN_IN_SHADOWS ~Gone from sight.~ SAY REACT_TO_DIE_GENERAL ~I will avenge you!~ SAY SET_A_TRAP ~It's set.~
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And thanks for reminding me what I forgot I knew there would be a lot.
Selection 1:you say something?
Selection 2:hehehe
Selection 3:*yawn* waddup?
Selection 4: ahhh...
Selection 5: what is it you need?
Command 1: but of course!
Command 2:ack! Certainly I'm above this!
Command 3: ugh, reallllyyyyyy.....?
Command 4: whatever
Command 5:look, I'll see what I can do, ok?
Rare selection 1: chuga chuga chuga chuga chooooo! Choooooo!
Rare selection 2:ow! Click on someone else, you slime faced dirtball!
Rare selection 3: get yer hands offa me, you damn dirty ape!
Rare command 1: fear not! It is I! Brave and powerful CHARNAME!!
Rare command 2: hehe...hehehHEHEHHEEHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAH!!!!!!!
Rare command 3:with speed and efficiency!
Battlecry 1:aaaeeeiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!
Battlecry 2:(sung) and I shall bathe
In the blood...
Of the fall-ennnnn...
Battlecry 3: YOU WILL SUFFER! YOU WIl-(Ooh, wrong end. That's gonna leave a mark)
Moral failure: apthhh! Err.. Im just Gonna pull a Khalid now.
Hide in shadow: pretty pretty walks the night, pretty pretty fears the light
Pick pocket: hrmmmmm... what has it got in its pocketsess????
Injured 1:ouch! Tommorow, come by me and you shall find a grave man! Ha... Really, nobody?
Injured 2: oof! Dammit, that hurt!
Near death: my gods!!!! This red liquid! It's spewing out of me! Help! Hheeeellllllppppppp!!!
In forest: ahhh... The smell of the trees, the wind in my face.. AHHHH! Spider! spider!
Night: Ahhh... I always preferred the cool of the night.
Bored: BORED! BORED!(bang) BORED!(bang) BORED!(bang)
Tired: is life itself not long enough?! Must we continue this mindless trek without rest?! Whhhyyyyyy!!!??? Whhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyy????????!??? *clump*
City:ah, how I love the bustle of the city! I wonder what that lady just duped out the window?
Leader: ohhhh.... so this is what the party looks like from the top.
Party death: Ooopsy-daisy
Crit hit: ohhh, feel the burn!
Crit. Miss: all part of my elaborate plan.
Daytime: were.... Are.... My sunglasses?
Trap set: Careful now, we wouldn't want to get all tangled up, would we?
Inventory full: (oops) HEY MAN, WATCH IT! LOOK WHAT YOU MADE ME DO! [or] *shattering noise* (oops) looks like somebody dropped something! [which is better?]
Spell disrupted: ouch! Ohhhh, bother!
Dungeon: y-ya- you Have someone looking for traps, right?
Target immune: immune? What sorcery is this?!
Dying: uh! not agai- ugh...
Crit. Miss: all part of my elaborate plan. is the best Critical Miss line I've ever seen. Props.
For Inventory Full ... the first one is better IMO.
Btw ... I think your little script could merit its own thread just fine. To be honest, Fan Creations is a rather lifeless subforum so another thread could only help. Or so one would hope.
#1 Selection 1: "Always keep an eye on your back"
#2 Selection 2: "Hehe, down with your sword"
#3 Rare selection 1: "Ooh, you dare!"
#4 Battle cry 1: "Die, so I claim my reward!"
I'll then (re) write some lines, particularly the dialog ones
SAY MORALE ~Such is the way of the world.~
SAY HAPPY ~You're an amazing leader.~
SAY UNHAPPY_ANNOYED ~I wouldn't have done that.~
SAY UNHAPPY_SERIOUS ~One more mistake and I'm gone.~
SAY UNHAPPY_BREAKING ~I warned you. I'm gone.~
SAY LEADER ~I'll do my best.~
SAY TIRED ~I'm so tired.~
SAY BORED ~*Yawn*.~
SAY BATTLE_CRY1 ~You will resist no longer!~
SAY BATTLE_CRY2 ~Prepare to Die!.~
SAY BATTLE_CRY3 ~Die already!~
SAY BATTLE_CRY4 ~Vengeance will be mine!~
SAY DAMAGE ~Uhh!~
SAY DYING ~My quest ends here...~
SAY HURT ~I'm hurt, damnit!~
SAY AREA_FOREST ~Out here, no one can hear you scream.~
SAY AREA_CITY ~This place is a world of possibilities.~
SAY AREA_DUNGEON ~All kinds of dangers lurk in the shadows.~
SAY AREA_DAY ~After every darkness comes the dawn.~
SAY AREA_NIGHT ~Those who hate the night fear their own, inner, darkness.~
SAY SELECT_COMMON1 ~Yes?~
SAY SELECT_COMMON2 ~How should I proceed?~
SAY SELECT_COMMON3 ~Pardon me?~
SAY SELECT_COMMON4 ~What?~
SAY SELECT_COMMON5 ~Yes?~
SAY SELECT_COMMON6 ~I'm listening.~
SAY SELECT_ACTION1 ~Onward.~
SAY SELECT_ACTION2 ~I move forward with caution.~
SAY SELECT_ACTION3 ~I got it.~
SAY SELECT_ACTION4 ~As long as we're still standing~
SAY SELECT_ACTION5 ~We must continue or lose everything.~
SAY SELECT_ACTION6 ~Anything in pursuit of our quest.~
SAY SELECT_ACTION7 ~Done.~
SAY SELECT_RARE1 ~I'll bide my time until this quest is over.~
SAY SELECT_RARE2 ~Be careful.~
SAY CRITICAL_HIT ~Meet your doom!~
SAY CRITICAL_MISS ~Nine hells!~
SAY TARGET_IMMUNE ~My weapon isn't doing anything!~
SAY INVENTORY_FULL ~Damnit!~
SAY SPELL_DISRUPTED ~That's a waste of my power.~
SAY HIDDEN_IN_SHADOWS ~Gone from sight.~
SAY REACT_TO_DIE_GENERAL ~I will avenge you!~
SAY SET_A_TRAP ~It's set.~
Muahhhahaha...