Hi s0ulafein, a bit of feedback if I may. I like the quality of the shading very much and the style of the lines, it looks great as a finished sketch, however I keep getting distracted by some proportions when I look at the anatomy. For example Yoshimo's tiny hands. In digital is easy to go with a lot of redrawing but if you use paper, maybe what can help is a very rough sketch (with lots of deletion / redrawing) on one sheet to get the proportions right, then draw the detailed figure on a new sheet to do the great detail that you've already mastered.
Can't speak for anybody else, but I know that I personally would enjoy your art a lot more if the anatomy was a bit more convincing. To me, it looks like your finishing up skills are somewhat wasted on figures with shaky anatomy structure.
Hi s0ulafein, a bit of feedback if I may. I like the quality of the shading very much and the style of the lines, it looks great as a finished sketch, however I keep getting distracted by some proportions when I look at the anatomy. For example Yoshimo's tiny hands. In digital is easy to go with a lot of redrawing but if you use paper, maybe what can help is a very rough sketch (with lots of deletion / redrawing) on one sheet to get the proportions right, then draw the detailed figure on a new sheet to do the great detail that you've already mastered.
Can't speak for anybody else, but I know that I personally would enjoy your art a lot more if the anatomy was a bit more convincing. To me, it looks like your finishing up skills are somewhat wasted on figures with shaky anatomy structure.
Thanks for your feedback. Completely agree about anatomy and I'll try to follow your advice. But I want to make one remark: I noticed that sometimes drawing that looks nice on paper turned out ugly in digital.
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Can't speak for anybody else, but I know that I personally would enjoy your art a lot more if the anatomy was a bit more convincing. To me, it looks like your finishing up skills are somewhat wasted on figures with shaky anatomy structure.
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